Antidisestablishmentarianism
*Imbic pentameter*
There's a Chalkbrush on the roof of my soul today
Erasing my life and my soul away
next to the bursh is a bottle
of glass
crushing the can of my hopes
at last
The bottle is broken, it fell a great height
my body is broken do you see my plight?
-end if Kris
Drums by DIM sDenise
ps.
It should be made clear that i do not condone writing winy-ass poems and being emo or goth in anyway. This was a one off that i was conviced to write down and then put on the internet.
thank you
-End if Kris
There's a Chalkbrush on the roof of my soul today
Erasing my life and my soul away
next to the bursh is a bottle
of glass
crushing the can of my hopes
at last
The bottle is broken, it fell a great height
my body is broken do you see my plight?
-end if Kris
Drums by DIM sDenise
ps.
It should be made clear that i do not condone writing winy-ass poems and being emo or goth in anyway. This was a one off that i was conviced to write down and then put on the internet.
thank you
-End if Kris
posted by Blog-na at 1:01 p.m.
4 Comments:
Sounds better when you say it haha..
DIM sDenise
that is not iambic pentameter. I doubt you know what it is. Or how to spell it.
LOOP UNTIL Adam
what about a hum???
and it really needs the drums....
lol
i know what iambic oentametr is and how ro spell it, also i am quite aware of the fact taht it is NOT in that meter.
-EndIf Kris
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